After speaking with Kath about my essay, I realised that I had a lot more work to put into. She commented on my layout, which was fault as I printed out a wrong copy which was in a smaller font and all clumped together. I shouldn't rush it next time so this won't happen again.
She also said I need to check Harvard reference to make sure it's done properly, another thing I shouldn't rush in order to avoid this mistake again.
Another point she made was to not write in the first person and always in the third.
Finally she said to avoid online journal and look at more books to bust the bibliography and information.
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